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Wise AdviceMy great-grandfather used to tell me, "Don't chase after cobras because you'll only end up with a thorn in your arm." I never quite understood his advice until one 4th of July , I was gardening with my best friend Chloe. All of a sudden, we found an underground tunnel! It was gloomy and spooky sounds came from deep within. Chloe saw something interesting inside, jumped in, and I never saw her again. Great-granddaddy was right!
A Simple Touch."Tell me.""Who are you, what do you want?""It's classified. Tell me where it is.""...""I demand you tell me or else.""I don't know.""Tell me, and no one gets hurt.""I told you I don't know.""TELL ME.""No. I won't say anything."BANG."Now you won't."--We walked down the path of Route 101. Starly flew over above us. Bidoof and Shinx ran around tagging each other. "Come on, I bet there's some rare pokemon at Lake Verity." He said. Who?Kyle his name is. He's a year older than me. We've been best friends since primary school. And now, 6 years later, we're still best friends.I'm Jade, I'm 13 years old. I live here at Sinnoh, with my mom. My dad.. I don't know. He left once a few months ago and never returned. Mom's been worried sick. I gave up on him coming back ages ago. Maybe he's dead. Maybe he's never come back. Or maybe he's been a complete player and started a new family. Even if he had, I wouldn't care. I love him, no matter what.I caught up with Kyle, and we ran ahead